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    Default All hail my art! :p

    So....Yeah it's my art
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    *hail*
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    It's nice! Very colourful Who is it?
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    My RP (or role playing) Character



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    It could use some more color but otherwise, pretty good. Not excellent but good.
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    Awww *sniff* You guys are great *glomps posters*



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    More art to hail! Myself this time
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    Now that one I really like!!
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    Your drawings look flat. There's a lot that needs improvement. I like the eyes you draw.

    The neck is far too huge though, the shoulders are off, she has no breasts, no waist and looks like a piece of wood rather than a human. She's missing curves - curves are fun to draw. Take a look at reference pictures, you'll see that every human is curved. Try to draw those shapes. It might be hard at first, but it'll get easier with practice.

    As to the clothes - they're lacking every sort of movement. Take a look at your clothes. They aren't just pinned to your body, are they? They have wrinkles and bend according to your body's curves.

    Heads aren't just circles, they exist in many different forms and shapes. Try a bit of variety there.

    Did you go for a comic style or a (somewhat) accurate anatomic style?

    I don't want to sound mean or anything, but seriously, practice and you might get somewhere. So far it's no art to me, I'm sorry. :/

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    I should use a guide more often

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    the last one is a bit better than the rest. but i have to agree with miriamel. stick with her advice or construtive criticism.
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    This one...well the clothes are hard to do. But I tried, and I will start reviewing other work soon!
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    I'm pretty much agreed with Miriamel, but don't be discouraged!!!

    Anyone who's started to draw was never that good at first, but that never discouraged me, or anyone else I know! Keep practicing.

    I do recommend (for an anatomy reference) any of Burne Hogarth's books. They're really detailed and explain a lot.

    I do like the bright colors... so different from all the dark stuff in my artwork. x.x Keep it up! I like seeing someone so passionate!

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    Yes, I do know this thread is old BUT this is a real improvment in my art....please don't lock it mods!
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    I see definate improvement on the last one. Keep up the practice, you could be really good soon if you work a little more on the things you need to.
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