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    Default [A] a chara i'm working on for my new manga^^

    (copy and paste if it doesn't work, don't forget, me still tha n00b here..)

    http://www.mangaworkshop.net/show.pl?imageid=12493
    Courteous waver,

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    Thats really good! He reminds me a bit of Riku, from KH. Good job.


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    Nice pic, it's simple but I like that, well drawn especially the hands and clothing, reminds me kinda of somebody from Digimon
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    It's a very nice start, but I'd like to see some details added to the picture as a whole. ^^ The anatomy needs quite a bit of work... the torso is way to long for the legs to carry.

    Cute style... ^^ Good, good! Keep it up!

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    >>> You are going to draw a manga, that is a lot of work!, Im drawing one too and im about to go insane..
    >> The black orb glitters ominously... but nothing happens..

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    haha, tell me about it...
    anyways, thx for the C&C's everyone, i'll get right on it!
    gimme some more hints in the meantime, ok? im still a freashman- manga-ka, and i need all the help i can get. thx in advance! ^_________^
    Courteous waver,

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    you want help ?
    hehe, I just hope you'll stick to your story, I tried makin a manga like 7 times and I never made more than 2 pages, I was always finding a better idea for the story but it couldn't fit with what I already had
    your character is cool, looks fun at first view, a bit simple but that's useful to draw faster

    I'd like to know about your story if you could give us some info that should be nice ^_^
    "Purification ?
    May I ask you a question?
    What is it ?
    Darkness is taking over your soul.
    Not at all, this is Corruption and I dont want to be purified, now you shall all die for what you've done to me ! "

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    >>> The best way to draw a good manga is reading lot of it, the japanese Shonen Jump have some very neat stuff to learn from it..
    >> The black orb glitters ominously... but nothing happens..

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