First of all, you have an awesome talent about you. That much is true. I can't draw stick figures worth anything, so I bow to your superiority.

Starting with her hair. I like the way you added detail to the "shiny" effects in it. Making sure that there is a lustre there without there being any light is pretty cool. The only real criticism is this. The braids look more like a chain of some type of food rather than actual braids. That's just me being nit picky, though. I guess I would have liked to see more on top, too. Nice length, nice work.

Her face. She looks to have a face of a porcelain doll, which is cute. I agree with an above poster that her eyes look like that of Lenne's, but it's a nice quiality of eyes, and would rather see more realistic like that, then something along the lines of an anime character. The shading around her eyes is fantastic. Love that. Eyebrows are nice and shapely. I love the button nose you gave her. That seems fitting. Her lips are a little out of proportion, but that's me being picky again. I'd just rather see a little larger of an upper lip, that's all.

Her upper body? The neck seems a little fat, but honestly, that's because of the shading. It's covered well by the scarf she wears. The plaid effect you gave to her scarf is nice. It adds a great touch. If it were plain and blank, that would be a problem for me. The shading in general is done well on her body, even if it's not much of it.

Overall, very nice work. I'd like to see more in the future.