Ah, more FF10 work, do you people know how hard it is for me to look past the 10ness of it, anyway, putting my hate aside for a moment a fair critque (I hope, sorry if it isn't).

The artwork as a whole is a very nice peice, simple line art really does give it a nice effect, well done on that, some people really mess up this kind of thing by over doing it and making it too dark or too hard to define. The other good point is the eyes, yes I release you have messed up the right one and thats why I'm ignoring the mistake as you are trying with it The detail in them keeps you rivited, yet they look real. The shadow effects on the drawing are nice as well, the only thing is I think the simple shading down the side of the face to the chin makes it look like she has terrible side burns, try either strengthening them or removing them and relying on the shading on the neck.

I think all the other really tiny niggles have been picked up by other people, but very good job on the hair, well done