Nope. Maybe I should post the revised clue... here, maybe this will help. It has about six extra lines near the end, and those will probably give it away.

Lost in the earth, lost to your life
Lost to the anger and hatred and strife
As you look to my heart, see into my mind
My envy of my foe - my friend - leaves me blind
Face to the foe, feet to the field
Feet to the air, clash of cold steel
The prize of my master may shimmer and shine
But the prize I desire can never be mine
And with this I suffer, will it never be mine?
Will I fall, unloved, traitor to my kind?
To this I say NO! I'm done with this wrong!
I've done too much evil, for far, far too long!
I've given up my friends, my familly, my soul!
And I finally break free, and again know my goal.
I used an old mans vengeful fury as a guide
as a beacon, for all of my rage, pain and pride.
I gained my freedom, broke from my master
And then faced his minions, brought pain and disaster.
I thought I was free... I thought I was me... I thought we were done.
But these tendrils of evil... in my mind... left me nowhere to run.
I took the masters prize from my allies to my lord
And begged his forgiveness, his slave once more.
But another old man came, not by land or by sea
And showed I and my master the way to be free.
And now I fight, for my redemption with wrath
And then, when its over, I'll then chose my path.

Hope that helps.