I think it is extremely awesome!!! Squall and Rinoa - I have to disagree with your comment on her neck and the fading of the color all together. The intended line is created in your mind as you let the color completely disappear. It's a way to extremely exaggerate the lightness there in comparision with the rest of your picture. It's a trick I was DRILLED ( much blood spilt ) to learn while in my AP art class. I think it was portrayed very well here.

The coloring is wonderful and I adore the jacket. Nice work!!