Can I post? PLEASE? I wanna say something!! Hehe.

You have a great talent about you, as I've told you before.

Head to toe, or in this case, chest, hehe. For her hair? She's a natural blonde, and you showed this quite nicely. In fact, down to a very minute detail since most females who are blonde have a VERY slight trace of red in their hair. I see you've done that with accent color, which is nice. The detail work on the shading, along with the useage of a light source to fade her hair in certain spots was done nicely. You know that if it were done in a different way, the end result might not look as good. The thing I've noticed that she's lacking dealing with her hair, is a clip to hold up the top part. She has a black one, I think, and it's missing from your picture. I only say this because it seems kinda hard for hair to naturally do that without some sort of manual help involved. Thing I've noticed too, which is cute enough to mention, is that the specific area in question looks like the crest on a chocobo's head. Have you noticed that?

Going from her hair to her head and face in general, it's a change. She has a nicely shaped head, but when it comes to the face, it's a little off. Doing this to be nitpicky obviously, but you did ask for comments and constructive criticism, so you're receiving it. She has no shape or contour in her face aroundher right eye. I saw this the first time and didn't really notice it, but when I looked at it closer, I noticed something was off. It's a small detail, but her eye seems to just melt into her right side of her face, which is kinda off to me. She has BEAUTIFUL blue eyes, and it's an improvement on what I've asked of you before (The direction of eyeshot, if that was you I talked to about it last). The details on her eyelids, her eyebrows, her face in general in that aspect are very nicely done. She has a cute nose, and to be honest, that looks great. I've seen some nose drawings before, but this one is good. Her lips are a little odd to me. It looks like she was in some sort of fight because her bottom lip is swollen compaired to her top one, or lack thereof. That looks weird now that I think of it. Her size is off. The lighting effect is nice on her bottom lip though, but she doesn't have an edge to it, making it look like it's missing, somewhat. Nothing to say about the chin or ear.

Her neck is something that I'll leave alone, since most everyone has said something about the Adam's Apple. My bone with that though, is that she has no neck in the back. The lighting effect took away her neck! o.O;; She also has no definition from her chin to her neck, which is kinda weird. Oh, that, AND her neck is too long, sorry.

Her SeeD uniform is AWESOME. Thing is, she looks too small in it. Need to fill her out more in it, otherwise she looks like a child. The way her right side is drawn makes the uniform seem distorted. Her right shoulder is bigger than her left. If she's facing off to the left (Viewer's right, as in the picture) her right shoulder should be smaller than her left, otherwise it looks like a conflict of proportion. To be nitpicky again, hehe (Sorry), the humps on the shoulder blades (Connecting the blue shoulders to the outer black sleeves) look like the uniform was sewn badly. Nothing else to say about the uniform, except that the SeeD emblem is fantastic. Love the work.

Again, with every nitpick comes admiration. I can't draw worth a crap, but I make a better critic. As I said many times before, you truly do have talent, and I envy you.