Cloud Strife

[Polaris]

That's very good,Cloud looks so cool.

Absolutely! It is really cool!

[black orb]

http://home.chello.no/~lizeth/cloud_and_sephiroth.htm

>>> Great pencil work, just as good as Unne`s..

[Ouch!]

In the first one, I can tell that it's Cloud. You hide the hair, but the facial features and his clothes and sword give it away.

In the second one, the only reason I know it's Cloud is because of the clothes he wears. The hair and his facial experessions just seem wrong, though. His hair is a lot bigger, and the eyebrows seem a tad too feminine.

Despite my gripes, the artwork itself is amazing. I love your pencil work. The shading is fantastic. black orb is right, it does look like Unne's stuff. Keep in mind, that's a big compliment.

[stesia]

[Fate Fatale]

I thought he wanted constructive critisism... I'll give you some! Could it be and worse? I mean it is so horrible!

[kikimm]

^...that isn't exactly constructive criticism....

Anyways---I agre with nik0tine. They're both excellent, amazing drawings. I admire your talent. Looking forward to seeing anymore..if there is any. Keep it up, most definitley.

[Fate Fatale]

(my own form of constructive critisizm!!! Fwahahahahahahahahahaha!

[FightClubFan#47]

[Shadow8017]

they're great drawings but as far as an accurate depiction of Cloud is concerned he looks a tad too beefy