[A] Almost finished avatar

[TasteyPies]

I started making this and about an hour into it I noticed...I CAN'T DRAW A SLICE OF PIE! OH THE IRONY! So, since I'm not finished and can still work on it its great if I can get some critiqueing and pie tips. Or soemone could just draw a piece of pie for me (sliced please) and either draw it on the first one or just draw it seperately for a referance so I can try to draw it myself.

To sum it all up
1. Tell me what you think
2. give me pie tips/draw me a pie (as a side referance or in the first picture)


Thanks again Dr.Unne for making me learn how to use "The Gimp"

THANKS

Edit: Finished!