the characters and things that happen are based basically on VIII, like the whole end of ze world by sorceress from another time and Squall, Rinao, the whole cast plus some new members

Here's a sample of what she sent me... (clears throat)

“How many years has it been? Seventeen? Eighteen?”
“Eighteen my queen.”
“And tell me now, who has condemned me?”
“Squall Leonhart and his friends, my queen.”
“Right.” The sorceress stood. “I will not be denied again of my right to rule over time. I will bring anarchy to all and all shall bow before me. Isn’t that right Tiamut?”
“Yes master.”
“Yes…”

Zenoah and Manoa watched as the half vampire, half succubus rose through the ground behind Quistis. Zenoah stopped Manoa from doing anything, shaking his head, telling him there was nothing that he could do. The young woman crept silently behind the instructor and, before Quistis could turn around at the feeling of something wrong, the vampire sank her deadly sharp fangs into the neck of their instructor.
“Dammit.” Manoa choked. He gripped the slayer sword, Griever, and stood up.
“Stop acting imbecilic Manoa and get down. She’ll see you.” Zenoah scolded. Reluctantly, he did and watched. The limp body fell to the ground. The succubus wiped her mouth, looked around, and sank into her shadow.
“She’s after mother, lets go.” Zenoah hurried up. When Manoa stay seated, he stopped. “She’s in danger.”
“yeah. Rinoa’s always in danger and I’m sick of getting her out. You go do it. I’m going to go find Laguna’s kid.” Manoa stood up to leave. The Lion Heart swept in front of Manoa. On instinct, Manoa parried the attack and was an inch away from attacking his own brother when he stopped.
The succubus stood behind Zenoah.
“Should I let her have him?” Manoa asked himself. Zenoah glared angrily to his younger brother as Manoa decided. As the vampire’s fangs extended and she got ready to pounce, Manoa decided against it and drove the sword over his brother’s shoulder and into the vampire’s face.
Zenoah wheeled around back back to where his brother stood. The two watched as the succubus phased through the blade, backing away and, after the sword was removed from her unharmed and beautiful face, she smiled.
“Nice try.” She complimented and pounced.

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