OOC: chaos: Sorry, this is off topic, but I just have to ask it. Really, WHO ARE YOU? In certain threads you say you are in College, some other times you say you are 16, and sometimes you say you are 12. Sometimes you say you have a horrible life, sometimes you say you are an actress?


Rubedo: Sorry, I just needed to get that off my chest. Anyhoo, the story is alright. There are many speling errors, and in reality, I don't find it all that funny, but if it is indeed your first story, I'll say you did a good job.