they are nice, I love the coloring on this first one.

Something about them feels off though and I can't figure out what... anytime I draw(it is worse then yours) it has that same feeling of "offness", and I really want to know what it is. ARRGHH, it ticks me off.. what is that which is "off" I DON'T know and I WANT to know!!!

sorry this is more a rant at my own then to yours... yours is nowhere near as "off" as mine... but it bugs me since it worked as a reminder.