Yeah, but just by saying that, id apparently did catch your attention.
Yery intresting. But wow, that's like one paragraph for the essays our teacher makes us do.
You might want to consider expanding on your thoughts some. Mabye find some additional information, just little side things, like when you said Lord Strange died, you might want to put in how, if possible. I've found it's those sorts of things that get the best grades. But otherwise, it's nicely done.