Quote Originally Posted by ShivaBlizzard8
I'd change the storyline as follows:

1. Edea and her (SPOILER)possession by Ultimecia would be apparent from nearly the begining of the game.

2. They didn't all grow up together and forget about it later. That was dumb.

3. The story would include more screen time for the secondary characters, not just Squall and Rinoa.

4. The SquallxRinoa relationship would evolve clearly and slowly, not pop up randomly 3/4 of the way through.

5. Ellone's role and Ulty's motives would be laid out.

Shiva, i agree with all but 2 of those. Number 2 and number 4.

Number 2: Well, it kinda made since in a way. They were fated to meet and know each other some how. And they had clearly stated from teh begining that Extended use of Gardian forces causes memory lose.
I mean, do you remember people from your elementary school(this is assuming that you are at least mid teens-adult in years of age)? If so, how hard is it to remember clear precise things about them. Then add the fact that Junctioning causes memory loss. I guess if i could change anything abou this one, i would make it alittle more clear how bad the memory lose can be.

Also, it didnt say they grew up together, cause clearly not of all them grew up together, it just said that at some point in time, they were all in the orphanage together. Im mean that should be obvious. Zell was adopted by Ma Dintch, Selphie was in trabia, Irvine was in Galbadia.

Number 4: The SquallxRinoa relationship happened just like most teenage relationships happen, 3/4 of the way into it. They fall in love quickly because thats how teenagers do it. How many teenage relationships do you know grow and evolve slowly?