the main charecter is an old man of age 80 hes at the verge of dieing when he is needed to lead an army of the farm folk and the rich folk in his world with him the poor could easaly when but he ends up dieing so the sientests of his village try to bring him back to life however in the prosses the man ends up getting his soal traped in his mind apon reliving so he now has tofind a way out. but one thing is is that his mind is being torn apart by these creaturs called fragments witch he has to get rid of to gane back control of his bodey and his memory. along the way he meets his teamates with represent his defferent emotions like wisdom,strength,love and so on. you can add the plot twists and what not.

i worked along time on this story and the man is only 20 while hes trapped in his mind

im sorry for the dubble post but i have another idea wich i just feel like telling you please dont use it.

the story starts out that this woman goes to a church to pray to the gods when during the prara everyone is killed in the church even the woman. however apon deth she is sent to a sepret place then everyone else by a being called morgodis. here she can walk in the world of the living however she can only interact with things in the speret world apart from human sosiety. the only way you can act with humans is in there dreams and you have to do this many times to save the lives of all thous who died of unjust causes. you see in there world when things die they go to this kind of other world like heaven or hell but ones who die of murder or suesied or just of unjust causes are sent to this sort of world inbetween worlds where you are.

you and along with other mid-world spirts have to go and find a way to kill morgodis and reclaim your bodys so none may have to live in this unjust midworld again.

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~Void