Quote Originally Posted by Agent Proto
Anyway, I'm not sure if this would be helpful for you, but yeah. Just some criticism and helpful advice. I'm not saying your drawing is horrible, as it's quite good.
Heck, as long as you give me solid advice, you can call my drawing whatever you want.

Anyway, thanks everyone, I'll try and see if I can't work this out and get something I'm heppier with up sometime next week. As always, feel free to post more help/criticism/whatever.