Quote Originally Posted by Doom
OdaiseGaelach, what's wrong with the face, so that I can improve in the future?
I thought that the face looks a bit flat. The arms and torso look round, but the face doesn't. I think it might be because the hair is very light and the outlines of the face are very dark and it doesn't seem to sit well.

Feel free to disagree with this if you want to, but that's what I think.