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    Just cause he didn't tone it doesn't mean he didn't spend time.. I know .. I got the same problem.. ain't good at toning very much..


    Anyways I got one carp on the dragon I think none have yet mentioned. It looks like a statue that has no emotion... or that it is braindead :P. I hate emotion.. I never get. I hope you have better luck then I do.


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    YAY! A DRAGON!

    the cartoon is funny, i love the little *DEAD*

    you've got it to a T, the simple things in life are best

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    Quote Originally Posted by ShunNakamura
    It looks like a statue that has no emotion...
    IT'S A DRAGON.

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    If it had been anything more than a head shot their would have been some emotion. Maybe some snarling or something.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Master Quan
    Quote Originally Posted by ShunNakamura
    It looks like a statue that has no emotion...
    IT'S A DRAGON.
    Point being? it is deadpaned. The eyes could have been narrowed or whatever. Dragon's do have emotions afterall.. even if it is always anger( and I dont' believe that .. but some do).

    Also remember headshots are still good ways to put in emotion.. just slight colorations in the eyes, changes in shape of eyes(slight), and the way the head is held can convay a lot. And I just wnated to let you know that while it is asthetically good looking(not great but good) it is .... well ... deadpan when emotion could have made it alot better.


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    Quote Originally Posted by ShunNakamura
    Quote Originally Posted by Master Quan
    Quote Originally Posted by ShunNakamura
    It looks like a statue that has no emotion...
    IT'S A DRAGON.
    Point being?......Dragon's do have emotions afterall..
    Dragons don't have emotions, they're goddamn animals. (Of course this is subject to opinion, as there are no things a dragons)

    Infact, I think that's the best part of the picture, the bemused look on the face of the dragon, the closest thing to an "emotion" that it could possibly have.

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    tis a kool dragon pic, but if wanna no how I would make it look betetr to may taste, I would make the brow lines more definate, and make the neck curve out at the head, not in, to make the neck look more conected to the head, if you get what I mean..?

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    Quote Originally Posted by ShunNakamura
    Quote Originally Posted by Master Quan
    Quote Originally Posted by ShunNakamura
    It looks like a statue that has no emotion...
    IT'S A DRAGON.
    Dragon's do have emotions afterall..
    There are no such things as dragons. Of course dinosaurs but no dragons.
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    just cause ti s mythical creature, dosent mean you cant make it shoe emotion, its the same as sayin a cartoon character shouldn't show emotion cause they ant really real! Emotion can be the real focus of a picture.

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