I give your review a flat 2/5.

You let lots of your personal opinions into this review, which means your review is, well, your opinion on the movie. You're supposed to give straight facts about the game in a review. There's a difference between voicing your opinion on a message board and writing a review. After giving those facts, you're supposed to say why they're sub-par, on par, or above par. You'll lack credibility if you just say, "This scene sucked. On to the next scene, blah blah blah." On a somewhat off topic note, you put an opinion in the worst place possible: in your summary.

Your summary is supposed to be roughly 1 paragraph, 6-7 sentences, and even 7's pushing it a little. People who read reviews, while they have a desire to have the gist of the movie, don't want to read more than they have to. Your opening could have been cut as such:

Patience Philips, played by Halle Berry, an unlucky art designer has missed yet another deadline for her project. She, however, is given a second chance at midnight. On the way to her destination, she overhears a discussion about a deadly product and is pursued and eventually killed. Little did the miscreants know that Patience would come back with a vengeance.

I don't mean to offend you, but your writing style is unprofessional and not sufficient for even a B-grade freshman high school paper. Rather than analyze the movie and give concrete reasons for its lack of amusement, you turned it into an all out bash-fest.

Oops, I just looked at your profile and you are fairly young. I guess it's not terrible for a person your age. I don't mean for this to discourage you, but to help you. Keep writing these reviews, as practice makes greatness(perfection doesn't exist).