Quote Originally Posted by gudkid View Post
ruby weapon?
Nope.

Quote Originally Posted by d£v!l'$ ph0£n!x View Post
REPOST:
is the fact that's it's all broken up important? for example "but if you don't see what you want" would have made more sense to have just been on one line.
Only to the extent that I wanted the lines to be of roughly equal length in couplets and most importantly, for one line to end with a pun:

For those in a hurry
Please pay a visit
But if you don't 'C'
What you want
Then go away and
Come back later