First off, thanks to everyone for the criticism. I wish the other forums I posted this on would come up with arguments against it. I'm not perfect, and I know my post isn't either.

@Behold the Void: Thank you for your post, best so far.

You can present facts that show the grammar mistakes. That I cannot argue because if something is mispelled, then it is mispelled. However, whether or not that would actually make the game bad is again a matter of opinion.

You can also present "facts" to say the story is bad, but what if I hate reading anything in a game and the story is the last thing on my mind? If I don't care about the story or grammar then perhaps I'd find the game fun to play.

In that case, it would be your opinion that the game is bad because the story is nonexistant and the game is full of gramatical errors (kinda like my spelling job of that word) and it would be my opinion that the game is good because they don't trouble me with long sessions of "A pressing" to get through all the boring text so I am always actually playing the game.

As for presenting facts, the only one you have presented is about the grammar, and that cannot be debunked. But the fact that the grammar in this hypothetical game is horrible may not effect how much fun another person has playing it.