Quote Originally Posted by raskerino
I want to say I still think this is a bad idea. ...
a) Having the new enemy come and attributing everything that has happened previously is a weak plot twist unless done really well, however as all you have at the moment is that idea it is weak.
Fair enough. I agree 100%, this is not something that will work unless done really well.
I am afraid I may not be able to do it really well, but since I'm not writing anything for Square Enix, just for other Fan Fiction afficionados, I will give it my best.

I posted an authors note on my FFX 3 piece on Fan Fiction.net saying that anyone is welcome to use my idea as a starting point, no strings attached. Hopefully among the thousands of writers there someone will take the challenge and you will have my best effort and someone else's best effort to compare and see which one is less problematic.

Quote Originally Posted by raskerino
lacing a remotely interesting enemy that actively disrespects and destroys what was important in the prequels is not my idea of a good continuation. Keep in mind I'm a skeptical bastard and I dislike a lot of fanfics, but this has serious problems.
Thanks, believe it or not, this kind of tough criticism helps!

The last thing I want to do is "actively disrespect and destroy what was important in the prequels" and that is why I'm here. I'm trying to understand what is important in the prequels and what is not.

If you ever read my stuff, drop me a note or post something in this thread. I'd like to hear your feedback on it.