Poor Emo.
I feel sorry for the little shrimp ^^'
*petts*

Still - as above speaker says - the "damn" part in the end is really what makes it all ^^
And though your lineart isn't quite... well... ^^' it's not manga - very doujinshi - I find myself amazed of how you manage to create a whol world.
It's really good ^_^

Keep up the good work!