Wedding Invitations (Part 2)

[Shlup]

So I think they're done! The original thread is a few pages down, for those who've forgotten.

Thanks to everyone who had commented on my invitation designs a couple of days ago. I really liked "number three" but since I drew it myself I thought I was just being big-headed, but then it got the most votes (here and on LiveJournal) so that's the one I'm going with. ^_^

If you remember, I'm having two invitations: my fiance's computer-nerd one, and my flowery one.

My fiance's. Unaltered from the last time I posted it.


Mine. Tweaked a bit.


As of now these are final drafts. I'm taking them to a print shop to consult with them on it tomorrow.

Is the wording good? No typos? Any other suggestions? I'm still open to hear 'em.

The finished product will appear as they are in their pictres. No embelishments or mountings. Just the map printed on the back. I'm all about the simple.

[Kawaii Ryûkishi]

Is it possible to make them glow in the dark? Also perhaps a fragrance would be appropriate.

[Shlup]

I'll pee on 'em. Then they'll glow in the dark and smell like flowers.

[Raven Nox]

Well, that might make some people more interested in them.

I think they're perfect, pretty to look at and I see nothing wrong with the wording or anything. Good job and congrats.

[Rye]

Oh, awesome. I voted for the both of them in the last thread, and they're both picked. I love them both very much. And it looks much better now you tweaked it, because it kinda hit the letters before.

[Resha]

They're both really pretty and nice! Yay for weddings.

[yunafan11]

They look pretty nice.

Maybe you could add the fragrence of flowers. Or a pink mist on them.

[Raistlin]

I can't wait to get mine.