Path of The Shadow my comic

[Sylvie]

Chapter 3 (the one where he gets the gold) is based off of Bogus Booty from Samurai Champloo.

EDIT: In fact, its almost completely ripped off of Samurai Champloo. I suggest you give some sort of credit to Manglobe.

[Reeno the Alchemist]

trust me i do its all over my cover for the chapter(i just dont post em cause it takes to long but i promise i dont copy anything els...i think other people helped me with the rest so i give 80% orf the credit to the thing i copied off of kk?

[Twilight Edge]

So when will you post chapter 4?

[Reeno the Alchemist]

wow you guys actually want to see mjore YAY well i fergot me folder but ill be posting some wed. so have no fear and im gonna try and make it so its easier for you people to read

[Sylvie]

And please don't steal like 60% of a Samurai Champloo episode...

[Reeno the Alchemist]

dont worry i dont copie off of anything(that i know of) from this chp and on..

[Rikku_Yuffie_girl]

good job kid and it looks cool

[~SapphireStar~]

Do you ever use ink for your comic? You know like, you draw it, rub out mistakes and then go over in black ink? IMO it stands the images out more, but its your comic You are doing a good job so far. Keep it up!

[Reeno the Alchemist]

<o< im...to scared i might mess up always do when i mess with pens..

[Rengori]

You still have that habit of using too many panels. That ususally ends up into a case of sloppy layout, which is once again demonstrated.

[Twilight Edge]

Forgive me for saying,but be honest.Is it just me,or did the Sephiroth-stab-Cloud-in-the-shoulder scene(AC) and Geostigma(stimina) reincarnated in this chapter?

Suggestion:When Cerberus screams,why don't you consider using those screaming dialogue clouds like most mangaka use when they put a dialogue that shows a character screaming/shouting?

Conclusion:Cool chapter.

[Reeno the Alchemist]

dammit! thought i wasnt copying off annything!*bangs head on desk*sorry ren but in order to fix the pannle problem i would have to redo the whole thing im very sorry later on i try to make them alot bigger and easier to read id redo the 5 chapters but i dot have enough paper sorry to everyone and ill take your advise Omnislasher Draco ugh alot of inprovments coming........btw SORRRY! alright i have a new method it takes longer but it should be easyer to read lets see if it works..

[Twilight Edge]

Wow......you sure did put a lot of effort on drawing the kissing scene.GREAT JOB! But you forgot to draw the scar crossing through Carberus's nose.

Conclusion:Improvement is shown in a great deal! Thumbs up for you again!

[Reeno the Alchemist]

thanx and the reason for the scar not appearing ..its not soposed to.you cant really see it at that angle i just put it there in smaller pannles so poeple know its there..but anyways is it easier to read it?

[Twilight Edge]

Too easy.