That kissing scene is well done and its so manga like. Usually when a dramatic scene, like a death or someone kissing, it does end up on a page or two of its own. Well done!
That kissing scene is well done and its so manga like. Usually when a dramatic scene, like a death or someone kissing, it does end up on a page or two of its own. Well done!
thanx peeps ill start posting them like this it seems to be read easyier
Who needs a signature I DON'T >(
I have Dissidia, be jealous!
The page with the kiss was very well done. In fact, it's the least sloppy page layout in the entire manga so far.
Kaycee says (12:06 AM):
whos' obama?
lmao was that a insault or a compliment XD j/k anyways thanx next chapter will come soon
Who needs a signature I DON'T >(
I have Dissidia, be jealous!
Compliment, it means your improving.
Kaycee says (12:06 AM):
whos' obama?
I'm sorry but... in the one comic, Cerberus says "This is it, huh? How pathetic..." Correct me if Im wrong... but...
SPOILERS
I recall Mugen saying that in the last episode when Jin and Mugen are going to kill each other, and then their swords break, and fall down unconcious.
And also that one guy looks like Zack from FF7, and I think his name is Zack too... and the Stimina in his arm is like the disease in Clouds arm in FF7 AC.
Otherwise, You are improving. The kiss scene was well done... try to improve though whats going on, it seems a little rushed.
Last edited by Sylvie; 06-04-2006 at 06:52 AM.
it seems everything i do has already been done and somehow i copied it not even knowing i was doing so.....so ive made a disicion to stop posting it cause i dont want to upset people anymore -o- sorry to everyone who ive upset
Who needs a signature I DON'T >(
I have Dissidia, be jealous!
at least you didn't upsent me... i don't think it is really bad to take few things from other works.... I myself I have written a story similar to FF... so was I stealing.. i don't think so.. and you too just keep writting the idea's you find in your head.. and shot them outOriginally Posted by kid_chronocrossrules
thanx owen ill keep making the comic i already have the next season thought out but i just wont post it on "here"
Who needs a signature I DON'T >(
I have Dissidia, be jealous!
Ok.. when you post them just PM me the link ok? ^_-
Yeah me too me too!
i will dont worry
Who needs a signature I DON'T >(
I have Dissidia, be jealous!
Oh come on! Keep posting it here, I won't bother you anymore...
trying to be nice now ha? well I don't blam you if you had seen something similar to other stories and stuff but don't you think that you were alittle more harsh than needed? she is really a good person and I am sure she wont use other work to make hers.
Well,me(regard to my post after chapter 4)and Odindragoon just sort of noticed the similarities.It isn't really her fault as we were actually thinking that she copied other people's work.Actually,all my mangas and my story(refer to my story in the wirter's forum,Chronicles of Dyne Esta) all include a sephiroth.Of course I did change the name a little but his looks stay the same,the katana is shortened and his eyes are black.trying to be nice now ha? well I don't blam you if you had seen something similar to other stories and stuff but don't you think that you were alittle more harsh than needed? she is really a good person and I am sure she wont use other work to make hers.
I'm working on a new manga btw,check it out if I get to post it up!
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