Pesonally I think the composition is fine. The long stands on the clock bring your eyes up, the circle on the clock face swings it around, and the brick in the back take your eye to the right ( the top of the picture frame does that too ).

( Though, I don't know much about photography and that's speaking soley from a lazy artist XD )

I find half the face behind the clock to be extremely interesting as well. It could be interperted as growth due to time with all the pictures and how photos are simply shots of images from our memories.

<3 Its a great shot, Rye.