Alara, is a name that just strikes my mind, and for your female villian, and your main villian, if they have times of redemption, you need a period of time/moment when they are at thier best (the heroes worst) and at the time of thier worst(heroes best) in order to effectively convey the struggle of im assuming is a good vs. evil
although in this story, i am coming under the assumption that this will play out more as a grayed out story? with neither side both white or black in appearance, demenaor, or ideologies.




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