Well, hi! I'm new here.
I just read though all this (yes ALL SEVEN PAGES of it! Grrrr) and would just like a say, wow. There are some brilliant ideas here, i especally love Wolfs idea about the Tutorial Clan with the Evil cute Moogle and his Henchman, thats brilliant.

And Kudos to Sky for doing all this. Im not optmistic as to where this will go, as a FFA sequal has recently been annonced (unless Sky already sent in his ideas. If so, WOOOO!), but even if it dosn't go anywhere, Wolf and Skys story together would make a brilinant FanFiction.

BTW, i'm loving your Female Villan Wolf, i think she should be like the Character who keeps coming to fight you evenery now and again, like Beatrix from FF9, Seymor from FF10, or that Dude from FFTA (can't remember his name).

Also, in regards to your other Villians, i think that each of them should be a King or Leader of each of the invading counties (there were going to be multiple invading counties, weren't there. It was so long ago i was reading that bit, lol, mabye i read it wrong).

Lastly, where did you stand on the idea of the Giants Sky? Personally, i think that including another Race would be great, and some of the Giant ideas seem really good. They don't have to be huge 4 square beasts, ambye just the size of dragons that fit onto 1 square? I duno, mabye it is a bad idea, but i think having giants as an unlockable class later in the game (thery would be your enemies to satrt with) is a great idea! Your call though.