*rides garden to island.*
hmm. this is good. remember this isnt about writing a bit of an adventure story. its about making friends and alliances and enemies. enough with the violence. id like everyone to leave alive. at least your getting good at using your powers. and remember the challenge is still on. for reminders the challenge is who can be the most in character.

and here are ideas for SCs map.
abadons forest (a forest full of high powered monsters such as ochus and dragons.)
the settlement.
the abanoned ruins.
the river of peace.

is that o.k? and thank you a lot for making maps SC.