Quick Drawing [A]

[Eminem's_No.1_Fan]

heres something i drew about 15 mins ago.

what do you think

[YTDN]

It's good but.. his body seems too square, and he lookes like he's in a very uncomfortable position. Also his eyes look weird.

But it's a good first try.

[Marly]

quite cute. I'm not sure if it's just me but his legs look a little ... short? Out of place?

[Eminem's_No.1_Fan]

Is this any better?

[YTDN]

Better, but the colour goes over the lines, it looks just weird... and I think the guy may want to kill me. That's what his face says.

[Rengori]

His feet, you gotta work on his feet.

[Eminem's_No.1_Fan]

Again, is this any better?

[Mum]

A definite improvement over the first pic. The person is more 'human', with not so angry eyes, more 3 dimensional (important) and better shoes!