Critique this sig in progress.

[Owen Macwere]

lol, your posts are still as long as ever, Shun
I like the colors on this one and the BG, cool effects. ;]

[ShunNakamura]

lol, your posts are still as long as ever, Shun

Of course they are long as always . The day I make a lot of short posts is the day someone should rush me to the hospital .

I like the colors on this one and the BG, cool effects. ;]

For a quickie she didn't come out too bad. Though looking at it now I wish I would have spent more time on it. As it is it is just a bunch of C4D's and stock images I threw together... no brushing :/.


Anyhow..... the fact that I am posting means what?

Oh yes, I got another one that I made whilst bored.

I wish I had spent more time on this one too[particually the text... but I was never good at it anyways so meh]...

Of course it is still waaaay over EoFF's file size so I can't substitute it in.... darn.

[Polaris]

I love the text is really good!

[ShunNakamura]

Likely my weakest one as of late, but here is a B&W I did for an event which occurs in the manga Mahou Sensei Negima.

*Short Post.... I must be losing it* Though I may be adding more later if I get another signature done.

Edit-
Got another one done... Whoop.

Background is no where near as fancy as I normally do, but I was going for a particular feel in this one.

Darn... my post is still short..... ah well.

[ShunNakamura]

Well looks like it is a double post since I got new material.

I had serious issues with the text. I just couldn't find anything that worked well. And in the end I still ended up with something that didn't work well.

Anyways the render is something I cut from a manga and then colored myself(so if the render looks blechy that is why). *Sigh* this is definately my least favorite of the ones I have done lately. Which is sad cause Nodoka is my favorite character from the manga :/

[ShunNakamura]

The fabled and forbidden dark art of the most evil of evil, the Triple Post.


Heh, yeah got two new ones to show off.

First up I have another Nodoka signature. It lacks strength and quite frankly is one of my first signs that I need to take a break to get back in the groove[basically I am backpeddling, and am repeating]. Also it reminded me why I generally make my signatures as long as I do..... Putting quotes[this one quotes Misora from chapter 165 of the manga in reference to Nodoka] or long sayings in little signatures doesn't work well for me.

Then we have one I produced for a gaming theme SOTW on another forum.

I don't dislike it but, I really feel as if I am lacking here now.

Anyways, basically if you don't see me produce anything for a week or more don't be surprised. Just lacking my inspirational focus that I need to actually please myself with these.

[Polaris]

I like the last one great text but the guy kinda reminded me Estaline They're all good... good unique style

[ShunNakamura]

Ok, I got inspired. Here is my latest. I have a few things I want to fix on it, but I think it came out fairly well.


And Ice Angel, that last post of yours was majorly fast.... only one minute after I posted mine.... However did you manage such a feat?

[Polaris]

Hmmmm interesting design! At least is something different

Oh no I just go to my CP and when I see new replies from the banner threads I try to reply ^^

[ShunNakamura]

Long time no posting by me. Got another one that came out a bit meh. I tried to use the same techniques(but better implemented) as I did in the first Nodoka signature.

[Owen Macwere]

Hmmm, The render can be blended better than this, and the Bg could do with some more effects as well as the text. It's a cool siggy, Shun. =)

[ShunNakamura]

Hmmm, The render can be blended better than this, and the Bg could do with some more effects as well as the text. It's a cool siggy, Shun. =)

Indeed, I must have forgotten to blend it :oops:. As for the BG, I had tried to add some depth into it but I kept getting some REALLY weird results so I left it without the depth(that and I have been time constrained and pushed due to college lately, that was stress relieve operation(sort of like some people go on walks, I go on photoshops).

The Way of the Warrior
May 8, 2007



I don't have much to say... I was just playing around when this ended up as the result(heck I think I was mostly asleep when I did it).

[Polaris]

The left image is a bit blury you could sharp it and text is not visible... Appart from that is awsome

[ShunNakamura]

The left image is a bit blury you could sharp it and text is not visible... Appart from that is awsome

Well the text was easy for me to read(and still is); maybe my eyes are a bit quirky when it comes to those shades. And I tried sharping out the left side but it always ended up as too sharp or too blurry for my tastes, so I left it as it was saved in the file on my comp.


Anyways the fact that I am posting means I do indeed have another. However, it is a bit half-***edly done. I just have been totally out of it lately... it has been way too hot and humid lately....

[Polaris]

Wow this is different from your others!

I like this one even though you could have worked a little hard on the bg! BUT it doesn't ruin the sig! 9/10!