Critique this sig in progress.

[ShunNakamura]

they're quite good, definately improving. The largest critism i have is on the picture quality. Not sure what program you're using but I don't see why the images should be looking like that. The pixelated text is the major perpetrator.

It'd also be good to see images in there.

Stay Essential
EE

The pixilated text is likely my fault. Because I feel the text must fit the theme I use a bunch of effects on it to try and theme it with the background. I think I make them too sharp too often.

Anyways thanks to Owen's magnificent Render link here is a render thrown into the 'Evil Seraph sig'. I tried to keep if fitting and merging, but I don't know if I did it well or not.

I used a disolving stroke on the image to try to give it a more firey feel and to try to match it better to the background an text. I think I made the stroke too thick so I may have to go back and fix it.

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'The ancient one' with a new render.

The Colorless version.

The colored version.

Lighter version.