Critique this sig in progress.

[ShunNakamura]

hmmm.. it has a look of steel, but try to use the brush and see what you get maybe it will look better, right?.

I'll give it a shot next time I open it up . However, because it is in the touch up stages it has a lower priority then my others I am playing with(basically this one could very well be considered finished now. I am just being finicky to see what I can do).

and about the text, it looks fine by me, if you don't like it why don't you try to shove it to the corners lower it, try and play with, you will get there.
the sig is fine by me, I like how you cut the background, it is really good.

I think the real reason the text bothers me is cause it appears a bit strong to my eyes. Maybe if the blue was a bit lighter.... of course if it gets too light you won't be able to see it easily... meh. Won't hurt to play since I may need to change the text anyways(I hate it when I rasterize my text... makes it hard to change up later).


And now it is time to unveil my newest sig, inspired by a freind's shirt and by a chanced upon render online.

Once again I am having some issues with using the .gif format(png has cleaner edges.. but too big). Here it is as a png so you can see what I mean.



In addition I don't think it would hurt to move the text a bit more to the right(to make it more in the center).

I made this one to test the grass and outer space effect tutorials I had read. Thus it isn't really as themed as most of mine. But hey I am kinda liking it. Now all I gotta do is polish it.


Here is another cow girl one I threw together real quick like.

Edit- Fancified the CowGirl Inn one.


Does anyone know of a good way to make the background look more like an old western door to a bar or something(I know you all have seen the likes in westerns(or I hope so)).

Well I didn't make it look like a door, but I did fancy it up somewhate.

As to Aisle:

Thanks . I don't really plan to edit it any further(particually since my brother is using it as his sig). The only thing I may have possibly done is make the arrow head more pointed(it squares off as now). But it doesn't seem to bother anyone, so heh. I declare it a success and finished.