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    The colours of the border are so nice, your work is really cool Shun.
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    All right new one, still not sure if I will go back and play with it more. I was trying some new effects that I had seen in a tutorial. Plus I got tired of pink or happy colored pokeshipping banners. So here it is.



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    I like it, especially the border, you seem really good at these stuff.
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    On another forum I offered to make some banners for a group. They liked my current one(in my sig) so I decided to take this chance to go back and modify that one.

    One of the changes they wanted was another character(well ok I guess you could call it another form of the same character) put in where the man on the right was at.

    And I got three of them.



    Just a straight change.



    Spiced up.



    Borderfied.


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    The first version with that monster is really cool!. I like the other too but they don't seem so visible. about the border, it is nice, but your first ones were better. :P
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    Working on a new idea tell me what you think. Just remember this is definately a work in progress, and is also my first attempt at such a ... theme?



    Need to smooth it out and clean it up a bit.... plus I plan to backgroundify the white tag. In addition there are plenty of finishing touches that can be added to it.

    I think in order to get the engraving feel on it I need to do some further blending on the pictures. The currently stand out too much, yes? I also plan to find one more picture to put on the spare chip, but I am out of them for now.


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    Cool style!. I want to review it fully when it done, so hurry up.
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    Well now that I finally finished cutting that final image for it here is what I got further along.
    Concept v2 of the Memory sig.

    I am still looking for places of improvement. Also I am worried I may have made the images a bit too blended. Plus I am not sure if I should have textured the slot like I did.


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    LOOONG time no sig. Made two more while on break at the college. All in GIMP. My old laptop can't handle much else(actually it barely handles gimp.... talk about slow). But anyways cause of the crappyness of this comp I just can do basic stuff, no ultrafancy filters or script-fu for me.





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    This was the last one I did while at college on my laptop.



    and of course as usual my text is bad(not that I got many fonts to choose from on this thing.... that and win98 is being a real pain on that issue for some reason).
    Last edited by ShunNakamura; 09-20-2006 at 02:33 AM.


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    1st and 2nd are quite nice, the 3rd seems a bit pixely to me.

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    Yeah I have been using real low quality images for all but the first of those. So I have tried some ways of covering it up/blending it in. Probably pixelated the whole one trying it in the last one.

    Anyways a new one, done on campus computer so I have a lack of brushes and text big time.



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    Hey that is very great. It is so different from your usual style, but it is very well done.
    Hmm.. only thing is that the render doesn't blend too well, but I love the text. great job man.
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    To the style... I try not to conform to one style. I was just trying to adjust to certian effects. Just as with Martial Arts I don't believe sticking to one style, mix and match never let yourself stagnate.

    To the critique
    The render for a change? hmm...

    Well I got another.


    I got the background and the images blended, plus found a quote I like. However, I picked up a bad headache, so just for critique I threw on some text, so if it looks worse than usual(text wise) it is cause I spent very little tiem on the text.


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    Yes, very great. the blending is very well done.... and the text isn't bad either. Nice size too.
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    Well made, text is very readable. It's blended quite well because of the red smog partially covering the renders. My only problem, and its small, is that the border is also red. I think that single handily says "too much red". I know its only just a tiny little red line, but it makes it too red. A nice blunt black line would be nice.

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