I created this
Anyone suggest any improvements please? I used acrylics and water colours.
I created this
Anyone suggest any improvements please? I used acrylics and water colours.
Wow.
^___^ That is so nice. I love it~
Nice, I like it a lot.
that's from the MoaG advertisements, right?
you made it your own beautifully! there seems to be more dimension to yours than an overdone movie poster.
G SpOtZ is god.
rcabronx is his goddess.
and i.....i am their Ruby Weapon.
I really like that The colouring is lovely, and the image is gorgeous. Nice work
What the hell, is that hair coming off the paper?
Yes it is from MoaG. I copied it from the dvd case. And no, her hair is firmly stuck on the canvas, thankfully.
Last edited by Marly; 07-05-2006 at 11:59 AM.
Marly, you asked for suggestions for improvements.
Firstly, thats a fantastic first go! Well done! You have shown sensitivity and emotion.
I think she needs a bit more colour in her face - a bit of blusher is always nice.
Re the eyes: remember that eyes are round balls resting in sockets and visable is the front part. Eyelids are usually always showing, and add to the 3 dimensionality.
A slight shadow on the underneath of the brow towards the curve of the nose would also enhance, but not too much as she has a quality of luminance and frailty about her which you want to retain.
A 'broken' dash of white or pink on the lips would add the gloss factor.
Hope these suggestions help.
Thanks for the ideas. I was finding it rather hard to add more tone and shading to her skin as my white paint had actually ran out part way through painting, so I had a lot of difficulty making what I had (very little) last. Once I get some proper new paints I think I can work into her face more. Also - although I understand your comment about the eyelids, they were that way on the image I copied, so that's how I left them.
I also done this for my art GCSE. I had 10 hours to work on it, when I can finally bring it home I plan to fix the skin tone.
Your art is so amazing. In the first one her eyes look so fantastic and her hair is so shiny. The second one is really beautiful. :strung: Almost as if it's 3D...*tries to touch it*
I envy your painting talents. Very beautifull work. Thank you for sharing.