Ok, normally I have a knack for English grammar rules and whatnot. Writing comes slightly easier to me. However, there are time when a sentance doesn't look right to me... this is one of those times. Does this sentance look punctuated right to you?

Quote Originally Posted by My random writings
If out of all the things he could have said – all the things he could have done he gave me one punch and forgave me I think we’re even.
Like I said, usually I can figure this out myself... but this throws me for a loop.