Critique this poster for me please

[ShunNakamura]

So, is this for like a school project?

Oh, cool poster by the way.

4-H Dog Project Actually, but close enough

And thanks

Can't leave good enough alone. And thank all that is good, I looked up the rules... and it doesn't specify that it has to be white. Just that your name and the ilk is there.

This one is bigger because I set it too my desktop size(or as close as I could).

I would attach it but it is too big for EoFF attachment, so I'll just use ImageShacks thumbnail.