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    OK, so Fuego gave me this idea.

    Honestly, I'm looking for any kind of constructive criticism. YouTube offers that to an extent, but comments are few and far between, so I would really appreciate it if y'all could listen (and watch, I suppose), and criticize, or applaud, or whatever. I'm not a very good writer yet, though I did kind of arrange the first song a bit differently than the original. So I have to give credit to the brilliant people who did write these. Any kind of feedback would be appreciated. While there are many things I'd like to do in life, becoming a better musician is very close to the top of the list, so any type of help y'all could be would be great.

    <a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bGA9WV1p-B4">Thirsty Boots</a>
    By Eric Andersen

    <a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vIYbIh89laQ">Darcy Farrow</a>
    By Steve Gillette and Tom Campbell

    <a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sncmBuYWSeg">Sweet Baby James</a>
    By James Taylor

    <a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sncmBuYWSeg">I Ain't Marching Anymore"</a>
    By Phil Ochs

    <a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=okEHK95bS80">You Can Close Your Eyes</a>
    By James Taylor

    Thanks for any help y'all can give, both from just commenters or other guitar players who can offer advice. I've never had any lessons, so I really don't know what it is that I need to know about guitar playing.

    EDIT: I guess what I'm trying to say is that I don't get a lot of outlets to perform, because I know I'm not near good enough to do it professionally, and it's not like there are a lot of people my age that like this kind of stuff.
    Last edited by Kirobaito; 07-25-2006 at 07:16 AM.

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    WOW ! you got some talent ! my criticism ... write something (original song please) and post it here !
    iI wanna see what you can do !
    But just by this, you are good !

    **Edit**
    Don't ever stop practicing on your guitar !
    Use it or loose it ...
    Chuck Noblet: Can anyone tell me the tragic irony of the Trojan War? Tina? Tina: Um, that horses are friendly creatures yet a hollow, wooden one was used to destroy Troy? Chuck Noblet: Wrong and no. Anyone else? Chip? Chip: That the mighty warrior Achilles was killed by a small cut to his ankle. Chuck Noblet: Chip is wronger. OK, here it is. The tragic irony of the Trojan War is that though it was fought over Helen, who was young and beautiful, by the time they rescued her ten years later, she was old and ugly. Tina: But wasn't recovering the king's wife reward enough for the Greeks? Chuck Noblet: Tina, an ugly woman is never a reward.

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