That's very nice. Approved, indeed. The only thing that can really bug me about it is the leg thing Rengori mentioned, and the 'sharpness' (for lack of a better word) of his limbs, but I imagine you were trying to emulate his FFVIII design* anyway.

Great job. You're really good at pen and ink.

*Nevermind, I read your first post. Meh.