[A] Tidus/Magus Sisters

[BG-57]

This is a portrait of Tidus and the Magus Sisters (Cindy, Sandy, and Mindy). I'm writing a fanfiction called Dance Macabre, where they're among the main characters and I wanted to show that the sisters like Tidus. A lot.

[Breine]

I like the humour in your drawing - It's very amusing I can see you have a talent, especially in your choice of colour, but maybe you should practice a bit more in the proportion (sp?) department. I'd like to see more from you. Keep it up

[I Don't Need A Name]

yeah, its a great drawing!! but the fat one (Cindy?) should be smaller, and i think the colours on Tidus' cloths are different, but thats me being picky. and he seems a little bit lanky, but other than that, its a great picture! nice one!

[BG-57]

I like the humour in your drawing - It's very amusing I can see you have a talent, especially in your choice of colour, but maybe you should practice a bit more in the proportion (sp?) department. I'd like to see more from you. Keep it up

Thank you. BTW, guilty as charged. :laughing: I've posted several of my other poorly proportioned work in the art gallery:

http://fanart.eyesonff.com/showgalle...00&ppuser=4610

yeah, its a great drawing!! but the fat one (Cindy?) should be smaller, and i think the colours on Tidus' cloths are different, but thats me being picky. and he seems a little bit lanky, but other than that, its a great picture! nice one!

Thanks. I don't have enough art markers to cover the total color range, but I tried to match as best as I could. And I found Cindy's character design verging on the grotesque, so maybe I'm overcorrecting.

[Angelroo]

I knew Tidus was a pimp!! haha, take that Tidus haters! Sweet job!

[41-Inches-Wide]

Oh WOOW! This is so cute! :3 :3 :3 I am absolutely loving it. ^_^

[Alive-Cat]

It's great art, I can't see nothing wrong with it!

[BG-57]

I knew Tidus was a pimp!! haha, take that Tidus haters! Sweet job!

Ha! He may act like a doofus sometimes, but I think Tidus has a lot of qualities that endear him to women.

Oh WOOW! This is so cute! :3 :3 :3 I am absolutely loving it. ^_^

Thanks. Incidently, the body language hints at the way each sister views Tidus in the story. Mindy sees him as a big brother, Cindy is cheerfully hostile and physical, and Sandy likes him but wants to keep him at arm's length.

It's great art, I can't see nothing wrong with it!

I wish I could agree with you. But artists are their own worst critics. But thanks all the same.

[Alive-Cat]

The only thing I could say is try to get Tidus to look more like himself, face wise. But I'm not sure how Tidus would look Anime style, so I can't help...

[Rocket Edge]

Good work BG-57, your talent is growing steadily.