Path of Cerberus my NEW comic B)

[Reeno the Alchemist]

ok guys sorry for the wait ive been SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO BUSY! but i did manage to make it to chapter 8!=D here is chapter 6 enjoy

[Twilight Edge]

The dinosaur is a dragon? Let's see......an eye, a spinal spike,a hand, a leg and a big pool of blood.
Good job.

[Sylvie]

I was wondering... could you post these in thumbnails? Its kind of hard to read things when all these huge pictures are loading.

Nice work though.

[Reeno the Alchemist]

hey thanx and leave my crappily draw dragon/dinos alone XDDDDD i draw dragons really good actually but im too lazy to y'know...and i always got introuble for posting my comics asthumbnails x.x people always threw fits and it takes me and hour and a half to upload them on here...im sorry

[Owen Macwere]

A dragon pet!!!. I like it so far... really can't wait for the next chapter.

[Yuffie The Failure]

WOO go reeno >=D you failed aand your comic failed i hate you ^^ <3333333

[Reeno the Alchemist]

-.- oh man its been hard you guys my comic has come to a complete hault sorry its schools fault this week im gonna try and work on it this is um the second to last chapter ive done so plz try and bare with me um chapter 7 is dedicated to my friend,my siggy maker,my supporter and my critic owen macwere just for you buddy enjoy chapter 7






here r some links if you cant read
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i2...ics/scan-4.jpg
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i2...scan0001-6.jpg
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i2...scan0002-5.jpg
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i2...scan0003-6.jpg
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i2...scan0004-6.jpg
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i2...scan0005-6.jpg

[Reine]

Heh, never saw the othwer comics in here before, mainly because im using a better connection where I am..

I dont understand my character at all :/

The yawn part is perfect though, totally me xD
The hot name comment There should have been a response to it, like a bemused glare or something

Also I find it hard to determine which panel leads to the next..

Its ok, but it would get higher marks from me if I knew what was going on..

[Reeno the Alchemist]

err sorry reine mm im working on the pannles ill soon be seperating them cause ive been practicing and soon you shall know whats goin on i promice

[Reeno the Alchemist]

im goin on a trip right so id thought id post my comic and sorry for double posting id fear noone would look unless i posted again forgive me anyhoo enjoy chapter 8 or um 9?(thats sad i cant even remember what chapet it is -.-)







more links'
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i2...mics/cover.jpg
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i2...ics/scan-5.jpg
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i2...scan0001-7.jpg
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i2...scan0002-6.jpg
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i2...scan0003-7.jpg
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i2...scan0004-7.jpg
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i2...scan0005-7.jpg

[Yuffie The Failure]

GOOD JOB REENO YOU ROCK MY CHECKERED SOCKS I DONT OWN!!!!

[Reeno the Alchemist]

ok curious question does anyone read this anymore?it seems only me and yuffie are posting nopw days i kinda need to know so i dont waste my time posting

[Reeno the Alchemist]

ok i dont care that im dopuble posting but here is chapter 9 WOO WE'RE GONNA OVER PASS PATH OF THE SHADOW WE'VE BEATON THE LIMIT (sorry over-reacted there e.e; anywhoo enjoy






links
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i2...ics/scan-6.jpg
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i2...scan0001-8.jpg
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i2...scan0002-7.jpg
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i2...scan0003-8.jpg
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i2...scan0004-8.jpg
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i2...scan0005-8.jpg

[Sakura]

Hee hee ^-^ Reeno's the popular girl If I didn't suck at drawing i'd lurk around the artist forums more~

[rubah]

If you don't mind, a couple of suggestions;

Don't be afraid to use as much room as you need. It seems like you want to cram as many little panels in as possible, and it makes it very difficult to read. Most comics don't go over ten panels per page, many mangas don't go much over six. Give your characters some room to breathe; plus, if your panels are bigger, you can fit more text into each one, and they'll be easier to fit. If you don't want to draw each talking character, there are standard ways to signify that someone off the focus is speaking.

Also, something that will *really* help your readability, maybe letting you keep more readers is inking. Pencil scans are really hard to read, and they're not professional looking at all. Even if you just do this for fun, it's fun to pretend to be professional, so look into it:] You don't have to go out and buy fancy copic markers, but dont' use a plain simple bic pen. Find one that's got a good black tone (the cheap pens tend to be a shiny red or purple). If you see a pen lying on the floor, test it. The best pens I've ever come across as far as color texture have been free. One of them was even drug out of the the trash!

It takes a while, but it will definitely be worth it