a new art peace

**Yew-Yevon** · 08-07-2006, 09:54 PM

well heres another one. Its been a wile since I did some drawing, but I got this book in Calgary that teaches how to draw Manga art, so I bought it in the hopes of improving. I just finished drawing a new picture so, tell me what you think... and please tell me what you think needs more work.

**Breine** · 08-07-2006, 10:03 PM

It looks very good - I especially like her eyes. Overall the drawing could use some more colour, though. Maybe it's the scanner that's messed it up and made them pale, who knows - but since it's manga it would be nice with eye popping colours

Keep up the good work.

**Rengori** · 08-07-2006, 11:00 PM

I kinda don't like the way the nose is shaded, it looks like it's a dark twinkle, other than that it's good.

**rubah** · 08-07-2006, 11:07 PM

she has no nose :O

but pretty eyes !

**scrumpleberry** · 08-07-2006, 11:25 PM

That is verrrry nice.

**Alive-Cat** · 08-08-2006, 12:03 AM

The drawing itself is perfect!

But I would say use ink instead of what you are using there, because it makes it seem amateur when it's not a solid colour. :-\
Ink is the way to go, ink is the FUTURE!

**lovehurts** · 08-08-2006, 12:27 AM

I like it all I think the nose is fine.

**Yew-Yevon** · 08-08-2006, 12:39 AM

Thank you all for the comments and helpful tips. It was my first real effert.

The drawing itself is perfect!
But I would say use ink instead of what you are using there, because it makes it seem amateur when it's not a solid colour.
Ink is the way to go, ink is the FUTURE!

(thanks and yes Alive-Man, Ink would be much better. however I'm a bit too poor to have a rainbow of ink right now)

I'm trying some full body pics to. two are street fighters (Akuma is proving to be very hard espesialy the face) and one is just a chick I made up...there my first ones so they won't look wow or anything

**AdVenT** · 08-08-2006, 12:43 AM

Nice work...

**Rocket Edge** · 08-08-2006, 12:56 AM

Great work. I love the eyes.

**Yew-Yevon** · 08-08-2006, 04:42 AM

Akuma is complete

...(I just had to look in my Street Fighter15 anivuresery maual)

**Yew-Yevon** · 08-31-2006, 04:02 AM

Sorry for the dubble post but I wanted to show a profile picture I made of Motoko from "Ghost in the Shell". I finaly bought some ink pens and tried it out.

PS: I know the hair is wrong

didn't have the right colors.

**lovehurts** · 08-31-2006, 04:04 AM

that female looks damn fine.

**tan** · 08-31-2006, 08:47 AM

It's very detailed and very well-drawn, and I like the way you kind of color with a top-to-bottom motion because it makes it look very smooth, in a way. It's a very nice piece :D

**Yew-Yevon** · 08-31-2006, 05:01 PM

Thanx!

Im looking forward to doing Lulu, Tidus, and Rikku as well.

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