Hmm... Actually I kinda like it. I just think you stretched your luck kinda thin by making it quite that long(maybe 400 pixels instead of 555 pixels[i.e. crop off the bit past the shoulder strap that the text starts on]) and by adding that other bit of text(the "I'll keep a part of you....). That bit of text is a bit too hard to read for how long the phrase is. Also it doesn't mesh well with the rest of the sig.





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