designing a game need help

[Jowy]

[DeStyle]

Jowy's right, man you got to stop raping the English
language. The faults on that part make me question wether
you're serious or not.

It makes you look like a 12 year old, and it makes me question
your game-making capabilities.

I'm guessing the game is going to be RPG-maker 2000, in
that case you wont need hand drawn concept art, the art
looks bad, better than what I would have come up with,
but not even close to the quality you can present without
getting laughed at.

I'm not doing my best to be mean or anything, but all you
show us at the moment is a story line written in crappy English.
And a peice of crappy unimplementable concept art.

Really if you make a game or if you ask help when making a
game just present yourself a little better.

[sexy yuna]

wel yeah i thought it was a cool idea so i decideed to join ya.

and this is how i draw lint and red

[Rostum]

Would it hurt you to spend maybe 10 minutes more to colour in properly? Or didn't you learn to colour in the lines at school? It just looks like you rushed to draw it in 2 minutes.

[escobert]

I WANT TO PLAY THIS GAME