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    Well I haven't been drawing much, but last night I was pretty bored so I tried to tone up my skills a bit.

    First I drew the old version (obviously) and showed it to a friend who critisized the hell out of it, and so he helped me with a new version (just explained a few things to me).

    So tell me what you think, what could I improve? Also, I'm still so sketchy with making a good solid line, any tips on how I can improve that?



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    The mustache looks funny but the skin shading is great. :3

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    I personally think the original is better.

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    the face and ear size is a whole lot better in the new one :] I would advice for more strand definition in his hair, and I love the moustache xD The shading is interesting too, and also a step up; the new one as a whole flows better and isn't blocky like the original.

    If you care to try a third, I would suggest more dynamic line thicknesses, in dark areas make your lines thicker, in lighter ones, thinner etc, and refine his nose a bit, give him a nostril maybe >:]

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    His neck is pretty strange. But it's a nice try. Kind of looks like a Zelda NPC.

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    I like the eyes.. they are sooo cool and the moustache

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