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    I hate this kid at my school....really badly...im a singer in a band and im going to write a song about him. the only problem is...is that im no good at song writing.i will tell you about him so you can use somethings in the song.....
    -he steals my friends
    -he makes fun of me behind my back
    -he thinks that hes all that
    -his friends thinks that hes sweet,but when there not there,hes mean.
    -he lies alot.
    ok,that should do it,now i will be sooo greatful with whover makes these lyrics.dont worry about the tunes,i can do that.
    Too big.

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    how is his name?
    what kind of music style u want it to be?

    EDIT: duhh now I saw that he was a guy god I'm tired!

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    But nobody likes emo music.


    there was a picture here

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    Why write a song about him when you could just as easily kill him?

    Owen made this sig. R.I.P.

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    Awww. ;_; I can really relate to you. I have a friend like that, his name is Kyon. He's always stealing my friends and my songs. He's leeching off of my creative juices!

    In the back of my head
    Crawling in my skin
    There's a voice inside
    Lying within

    It screams out his name
    In a bout of rage
    KYON YOU JERK
    I'M GOING TO CALL A BLACK MAGE

    TO BURN
    BURN
    BURN
    BURN
    BURN YOU OUT OF MY LIIIIFE.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Arucard
    Why write a song about him when you could just as easily kill him?
    Maybe he's going to kill him with his music?

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    What do you think of this as the first part (still missing the chorus the second part and the last one)

    He steals and he lies
    I'll curse your hypocritical smile
    One day everyone will see
    The smurfing bastard
    You never show to your friends
    To them
    You're the sweet angel from the skies
    You're the devil that no one likes

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    Quote Originally Posted by Anaisa View Post
    Quote Originally Posted by Arucard
    Why write a song about him when you could just as easily kill him?
    Maybe he's going to kill him with his music?
    Oh no I meant kill him with some kind of weapon. Maybe he could use music though. But it has to be really loud.

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    WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME
    I DID NOTHING TO YOUUUUUU
    HOW DID YOU STEAL MY FRIENDS
    YOUR BREATH SMELLS LIKE POOOOOOO

    UH UH UUUUUHHHH

    WHY CAN'T YOU TALK TO MY FACE
    WHY DO YOU ACT ALL SWEET
    I WANT TO BEAT YOUR HEAD UP
    AND KICK YOU WITH MY FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET AAAAAAH (you should scream this part to show your fury)

    YOU'RE NOT ALL THAT
    I HATE YOUUUUUUUU
    I BET YOUR MOM IS FAT
    I HATE YOUUUUUUUU
    I CAN'T WAIT TIL YOU LEAVE
    I HATE YOUUUUUUUU
    WHEN YOU'RE GONE I WON'T GRIEVE

    AAAARRRRRGHHHHH
    ALL YOU DO IS LIE
    I ASK MYSELF WHY
    DO I EVEN TRY
    BUT YOU WON'T MAKE ME CRY
    I WISH THAT I COULD FRY
    YOU IN YOUR STUPID EYE
    AND THEN YOU'D WANT TO DIE
    AND IT WOULDN'T BE GOODBYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

    YOU'RE NOT ALL THAT
    I HATE YOUUUUUUUU
    I BET YOUR MOM IS FAT
    I HATE YOUUUUUUUU
    I CAN'T WAIT TIL YOU LEAVE
    I HATE YOUUUUUUUU
    WHEN YOU'RE GONE I WON'T GRIEVE

    RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

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    Quote Originally Posted by DK View Post
    WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME
    I DID NOTHING TO YOUUUUUU
    HOW DID YOU STEAL MY FRIENDS
    YOUR BREATH SMELLS LIKE POOOOOOO

    UH UH UUUUUHHHH

    WHY CAN'T YOU TALK TO MY FACE
    WHY DO YOU ACT ALL SWEET
    I WANT TO BEAT YOUR HEAD UP
    AND KICK YOU WITH MY FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET AAAAAAH (you should scream this part to show your fury)

    YOU'RE NOT ALL THAT
    I HATE YOUUUUUUUU
    I BET YOUR MOM IS FAT
    I HATE YOUUUUUUUU
    I CAN'T WAIT TIL YOU LEAVE
    I HATE YOUUUUUUUU
    WHEN YOU'RE GONE I WON'T GRIEVE

    AAAARRRRRGHHHHH
    ALL YOU DO IS LIE
    I ASK MYSELF WHY
    DO I EVEN TRY
    BUT YOU WON'T MAKE ME CRY
    I WISH THAT I COULD FRY
    YOU IN YOUR STUPID EYE
    AND THEN YOU'D WANT TO DIE
    AND IT WOULDN'T BE GOODBYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

    YOU'RE NOT ALL THAT
    I HATE YOUUUUUUUU
    I BET YOUR MOM IS FAT
    I HATE YOUUUUUUUU
    I CAN'T WAIT TIL YOU LEAVE
    I HATE YOUUUUUUUU
    WHEN YOU'RE GONE I WON'T GRIEVE

    RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
    You jerk! You stole my song AGAIN! You make my blood BOIL. You make me want to scream in a storm as my tears and the rain mingle.

    GET OUT
    GET OUT OF MY HOUSE
    YOU CAN'T
    YOU CAN'T HAVE MY LOUSE
    ALL THIS TIME
    I CAN'T BELIEVE IT WAS YOU
    WITH MY MOM
    UNDER THE COVERS
    ALL THIS TIME
    I CAN'T BELIEVE
    YOU WERE MY MOM'S LOVER


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    I know you lie alot alot alot alot,
    So I think that you should be shot,
    Because my friend is what you are not.

    So I'm writing this song about you and how you should be shot
    Don't think it's nerdy, because it's not.


    ASFHAbjakdbfjhADSFJHADRSJHARSDJH (spontaneous grunts and such)
    ASDGJADLVJCdsyWEYAS
    *Words that can't be posted on this forum*

    TIDUSMASTER IS MY NAME,
    AND TO YOU I SHALL BRING SHAME

    I CUT OFF A CHICKEN'S HEAD
    AND YOU ARE NEXT IN LINE MY FRIEND

    STOP TALKING ABOUT ME BEHING MY GOD DAMN BACK
    I BET YOUR TEETH HAVE LOTS OF PLAQUE

    My rhyming scheme here really sucks,
    But if you want A GOOD SONG YOU'RE [img]/xxx.gif[/img][img]/xxx.gif[/img][img]/xxx.gif[/img][img]/xxx.gif[/img] OUT OF LUCK.

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    He steals and he lies
    I'll curse your hypocritical smile
    One day everyone will see
    The smurfing bastard
    You never show to your friends
    To them
    You're the sweet angel from the skies
    You're the devil that no one likes

    One day you'll be alone
    I hope you'll burn
    Alone somewhere no one knows
    Your fakeness will die with you

    You lied again
    You can't stop that cicle
    Shoot yourself in the head
    And will see no brains inside
    Coz you have nothing in your mind

    Wake up alone
    Cry all your blood
    Watch your image fading so good
    This world would be a lot more cool

    One day you'll be alone
    I hope you'll burn
    Alone somewhere no one knows
    Your fakeness will die with you

    Not good but whatever

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    im not emo and i dont listen to songs with lyrics...im into instrumental stuff...im currently into greg howe and his fusion styles suchas the album Extraction....

    ill give the lyrics a go though....

    he steals my friends
    -he makes fun of me behind my back
    -he thinks that hes all that
    -his friends thinks that hes sweet,but when there not there,hes mean.
    -he lies alot.
    lets see...

    you steal my friends....
    you laugh behind my back....
    you think your all that...well..i am....
    idiots think your sweet...i kick their ass aswel...
    he lies alot....and looks like snot....hahahha....

    well...here is somethin i prepared earlier..if taht catchy tune didnt tickle your fancy......hahaha


    Start trouble, spread pain
    Piss and venom, in your veins
    Talk nasty, breathe fire
    Smell rotten, you're a liar
    Sweat liquor, breathe snot
    Eat garbage, spit blood
    Diseased, health hazard
    Scum bag, filthy bastard
    Greasy face, teeth decay
    Hair matted, drunk all day
    Abscessed, sunken veins
    Rot gut, scrambled brain
    Steal money, crash cars
    Rob jewelry, hock guitars
    Rot in hell, it's time you know
    To your master, off you go
    You're a liar


    i wonder where the inspiration came from.....huh???

    Sephiro this here.

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    I don't really like you
    I think you are like poo
    Because poo is smelly
    And so are you

    Get out of my life
    Stop stealing my friends
    I will make you wee your pants and
    you will die

    I am a monster AH HA HA HA HAAAA
    I will eat your destiny AH HA HA HA HAAAA
    Don't try and be mean to me AH HA HA HA HAAAA
    Because you are not nice AH HA HA HA HAAAA

    There was this one time
    Do you remember?
    When you were pretending to be sweet
    but you weren't really; you were only pretending

    stop making fun of me behind my back
    or i will stab you in a brutal fashion
    with my dad's presentation samurai swords
    vengeance is in the air

    I am a monster AH HA HA HA HAAAA
    I will eat your destiny AH HA HA HA HAAAA
    Don't try and be mean to me AH HA HA HA HAAAA
    Because you are not nice AH HA HA HA HAAAA

    *guitar solo*

    I am a monster AH HA HA HA HAAAA
    I will eat your destiny AH HA HA HA HAAAA
    Don't try and be mean to me AH HA HA HA HAAAA
    Because you are not nice AH HA HA HA HAAAA



    That should about do it imo

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