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    The Adventures of Ed...5!

    The final part to this story. I will be making more, but they will probably be stand alone comics, not more story (unless I think of something that's worth it). I have all of them attached for the new people. The fifth attachment is the new one. Enjoy!
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    xDDD. Where's the rest?
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    And the makings of a good plan

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    Belto makes me happy.

    The missing fifth attachment makes me sad.
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    Oh, Ed.

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    I really want the other 4 parts...
    Leave some shards under the belly
    Lay some grease inside my hand
    It's a sentimental jury
    And the makings of a good plan

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    Totally smurfing awesome. That is so what I would have said and done

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    Quote Originally Posted by Flying Mullet View Post
    Belto makes me happy.

    The missing fifth attachment makes me sad.
    All of them should be there. If this problem continues I will post the newest one in her directly, though it will take up a lot of space.

    EDIT: Screw it. I hope it doesn't crash, though. No one attempt to save it please, so it can stay up!

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    I didn't notice before...but Belto has belts floating in the background of his fire storm XD

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    Quote Originally Posted by Strider View Post
    Oh, Ed.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Decessus View Post
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    Oh, Ed.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tavrobel View Post
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    Oh, Ed.

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    Thanks to everyone that has been following this. As I have already said, I plan on continuing this comic. Just wanted to drop by and thank everyone for their support!

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    Since you've gotten a lot of good reviews, I guess it's finally safe for me to have my say. Ever since the first "Adventures of Ed" I wanted to say this, but I didn't want to insult you. Just take what I say with a grain of salt, OK?

    I haven't enjoyed these comics much. The jokes are slightly amusing at best, the art is only so-so, and the story arc is uninspired and predictable. That having been said, you've improved from the start to end, and I think you can improve even more if you're going to continue. The point I hope you can work on the most is some better joke material.

    I really hope you can take this for another opinion and not see it as rude. I'm not trying to be too negative.
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    That's fine. Kepp in mind that I do tend to try to write around Ed's real life personality blended with how I believe people on the net percieve him. The art is crap because I can't draw that well, so I decided to make it look all kiddy, though, I have noticed an improvement my writing, as you have pointed out. Thank you for your honesty.

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