The Adventures of Ed...5!
The final part to this story. I will be making more, but they will probably be stand alone comics, not more story (unless I think of something that's worth it). I have all of them attached for the new people. The fifth attachment is the new one. Enjoy!
xDDD. Where's the rest?
Leave some shards under the belly
Lay some grease inside my hand
It's a sentimental jury
And the makings of a good plan
Belto makes me happy.
The missing fifth attachment makes me sad.
Oh, Ed.
I really want the other 4 parts...
Leave some shards under the belly
Lay some grease inside my hand
It's a sentimental jury
And the makings of a good plan
Totally smurfing awesome. That is so what I would have said and done
All of them should be there. If this problem continues I will post the newest one in her directly, though it will take up a lot of space.Originally Posted by Flying Mullet
Belto makes me happy.
The missing fifth attachment makes me sad.
EDIT: Screw it. I hope it doesn't crash, though. No one attempt to save it please, so it can stay up!
Last edited by Sephex; 11-09-2006 at 11:23 PM.
I didn't notice before...but Belto has belts floating in the background of his fire storm XD
Beautiful. Just beautiful.
Bow before the mighty Javoo!
Thanks to everyone that has been following this. As I have already said, I plan on continuing this comic. Just wanted to drop by and thank everyone for their support!
Since you've gotten a lot of good reviews, I guess it's finally safe for me to have my say. Ever since the first "Adventures of Ed" I wanted to say this, but I didn't want to insult you. Just take what I say with a grain of salt, OK?
I haven't enjoyed these comics much. The jokes are slightly amusing at best, the art is only so-so, and the story arc is uninspired and predictable. That having been said, you've improved from the start to end, and I think you can improve even more if you're going to continue. The point I hope you can work on the most is some better joke material.
I really hope you can take this for another opinion and not see it as rude. I'm not trying to be too negative.
That's fine. Kepp in mind that I do tend to try to write around Ed's real life personality blended with how I believe people on the net percieve him. The art is crap because I can't draw that well, so I decided to make it look all kiddy, though, I have noticed an improvement my writing, as you have pointed out. Thank you for your honesty.
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