Tite Kubo's style is hard to protray(I tried drawing, but my best was Rukia, Byakuya and the Zangetsu blade), but your drawing(colored one), apart from the mouth, is pretty good. However, I find no connection between and fashoin sense in a furry Squall-style vest and that kimono-thingy clothes(what's that called again?) of a Shinigami.